Do you have the stomach for this dark poetry?

Question

Do you have the stomach for this dark poetry?
Just finished reading a story about a dude that killed his wife and kids....and had to write.

Answer

Do you have the stomach for this strong opinion?brbrAs I usually do, I was reading this aloud, but it read so awkwardly that I stopped reading out loud at quotdown an ugly sneerquot because I couldnt make it read like poetry, it reads like industrial drain cleaner. After that things got vague one of the reasons I read out loud is so that when the topic is boring I dont just drift off. This poem is like feet of muslin and no mummy. All that foreshadowing and you ran out of steam before you even GOT TO THE STORY.